Three Line Tale – Challenge hosted by Sonya, Author of the blog, “Only 100 Words.”
Bright colored flags flutter in the breeze where I wait for you, but you are thirty minutes late.
I'm tired of waiting, where are you?!
Screeching tires, crashing metal, and sirens, drops my heart to the floor.
This is my submission for the challenge, Three Line Tales. This challenge is open to all who would like to participate. Sonya gives us a photo prompt and 3 lines to create our story. For more information, click here.
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61 thoughts on “TLT – Waiting – Week 8”
wow, drama in three lines! well done, PJ 🙂
Uh oh, did something happen? Great suspense!
Thank you! 🙂
The man she was waiting for to pick her up was in a car accident.
That’s not good.
No, that’s not good at all.
No, that’s not good at all!
Fantastic set up for the 3rd line…now all of us will be worried about the outcome! Well done!
Thank you so much!!
Whoah, Joy – that was quite a punch you gave us at the end there. Poor her – and poor him. A mini tragedy – well written and nicely done 🙂
Thank you so much! I wanted to end with a punch, so I’m glad to hear that.
Well, you definitely suceeded! A great ending after a great set up 🙂
Thank you so much, Lynn! I appreciate that.
Total pleasure, Joy 🙂
wow this is gripping!
Thank you!! I hoped it would be. 🙂
It really is 🙂
Fantastic three liner indeed! The rise of emotion at the end of the lines, perfect!
Thank you so much! I appreciate your feedback! 🙂
That’s a lot of story in three lines! Well done Priceless!
Thank you so much, Colleen! 🙂
Oh my! My heart dropped! Well done 😊
Thank you so much, Kay!!
For three lines, you’ve packed a powerful punch! Wonderful job PJ. Happy Easter! Hope you get to see your family this weekend my friend 🙂
Thank you so much, Mandi! Happy Easter to you too! Thanks for your feedback!!
Well done, but so sad. :’-(
Thank you Barb! Yes, it is very sad. 😦
My stomach churned in anticipated fear. Gripping in such shortness.
Thank you Jacqueline for your feedback!
Oh, our impatience breeds the need to hurry. Well done! I’ll remember this as we drive to Yosemite this weekend. No hurrying!
Yes, please, drive safely!!
Oh and enjoy Yosemite!
Thanks, PJ, and photos to come 🙂
Wonderful! I look forward to seeing them. 🙂
So intensely heartbreaking! Well done.
Thank you so much, Roger!
Oh no! This has so much energy, the fluttering flags, the tired of waiting, the screeching…you packed a punch in this one!! You’re so great at this. 🙂
That is so sweet of you to say, Deb. I wish I was!! LOL! Thank you so much!!
You’re so welcome, and keep em coming!! xo
Thank you!! xoxo
And the flags turned red?
Thank you for reading and commenting! The flags didn’t turn red. 😀
Dramatic! This was different Pj. Aw, I hope her man gets better.
Thank you, Ameena! I believe that he does. 😀
great take on this! It’s so wonderful to read what others saw in the same image!
It truly is very interesting to see what others see in photo prompts!
I agree! No two see the same thing and I find that astounding!
It really is!!
Thank you so much for your kind comment!
You’re welcome 🙂
Oh!!! That third line made my jaw drop, PJ!!!
Thank you, Rosema!! 🙂 🙂
It is my pleasure! 😀 You nailed this one! 😀
Thank you, very much!! 🙂 xoxo
Great three lines. A full story, a beginning, middle and end.
Thank you very much! I appreciate your feedback!
Aww.. this hurts like a thousand heartbreak piercing your heart at once!!
I love how you do it with just three lines PJ. 😀
Thank you, Maria! I appreciate you reading and commenting!
You’re most welcome PJ… It really is a lovely read. ❤ 🙂
Thank you!! 🙂