FFfAW-True Love?

Adam asked me to meet him for coffee and I gladly did so. I was happy because I thought that meant that he was sweet on me as I certainly was sweet on him.

My hopes were up. Finally! He has noticed me. It was about time!

As soon as I sat down I noticed his sad face.

“What's wrong, Adam?”

Claudia has left me.”

My heart sank. (Who was Claudia?)

“Will you help me get her back?”

(What was I suppose to say? Sure I will!?)

“Hell No!” I answered.

I then got up and quickly walked out.


Thank you Dawn Miller for our photo prompt this week.


This is my 100 word submission for the flash fiction challenge, Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. I decided to write something light hearted since it has been a sad two weeks for me. Thank you all for carrying on while I was away. The Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers is a flash fiction challenge that is fun and everyone is invited to participate. We are given a photo prompt and approximately 75-175 words with which we create our stories. For more information, click HERE.

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70 thoughts on “FFfAW-True Love?

  1. Yes! Go stand up for yourself girl! I like to think it left the guy stunned and thinking “So what did I do wrong?” Silly man. Also – good to see you back! Hope you’re alright.

  2. Either this guy is using her as a friend, knowing she likes him so she is essentially making him feel good and giving his ego a boost. But he is more than a jerk because he knows she likes himand is leading her on. I hate guys like this. I have dealt with a few and have worse words than jerk to say about it lol. I’m glad she said hell no and left him πŸ™‚ wonderful writing PJ πŸ™‚

  3. Or maybe if she decided to help Adam, and Adam realized what a sweetheart she really was he might decide twice about Claudia. Maybe she was too rash in her decision not to help…we’ll never know!! Great story PJ! πŸ™‚

  4. Sadly she found out he is not the friend she thought he was and to make it worse, he wants her help with the relationship he has with the other woman. Perhaps she read more into it then she should have, but certainly has a clear idea of how things really are now..Wonderful story.

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