FFfAW – Will You Marry Me?

“I can't marry you right now,” I told David after he asked me the question. He didn't say a word, he just got up and left, leaving me alone and confused.

He didn't say where he was going and I had made up my mind that I would find him. I drove all over town as my eyes fogged up from the tears.

My heart was broken. Maybe I was too hasty in my decision. After all, I can't imagine spending the rest of my life with anyone but David. He didn't understand that my first marriage didn't end so well, leaving me shy from marrying again.

I have made up my mind. I will keep looking until I find him and tell him that I would marry him after all. I can see clearly now.

Thank you Wildverbs for our photo prompt this week!

This is my 136 word story for the flash fiction challenge, Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. We are given a photo prompt that is kindly photographed by our participants and approximately 75-175 words with which to create our stories. It's fun and everyone is invited to participate. For more information, click HERE.

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49 thoughts on “FFfAW – Will You Marry Me?

  1. I hope she finds him and I’m sure that once she explains why she turned him down the first time, he’ll understand. Lovely story.

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